3/19 Feedback Notes

turning thinsg on and off
not envolope /-\ too many attack, too fast, attack should not be a long attack
- a little bit of subtlety
like the star and the splatters going all directions, hitting too blantly
half a second to spill out - slower, poetry of how they reveal
color - subtle change in hue
- invest in shaders, add hue
- auras and glows
- too much of same color, more gradiance (saturation, brightness)
- contrasting color
- amplitude of the whole piece - add particles growing a little bit
- decay - don’t grow with same speed - one respond quickly, one takes a bit longer
last scene - flat - but like the color
- new particles came in as high hat - see new particles coming on that note
architecture as a force field, as a displacement map
- ripples in it from the architecture
zach liberman - ambient church
lift camera up - paralex in space

Jeremy Rotsztain

Jeremy Rotsztain

visual grammar - don’t suddenly introduce sth not following the previous language