Set Up
Artifacts
Dan’s blog
Feedback (4/29)
- sound makes it urgent, while text hints its in the past
- you can’t go back in one chapter
- can’t interrupt - highlight the texture of the voice
- its good that the perspectives are not arguing with each other, they are just provide different versions
- good to have the correct reference - tarot card
- no specific “bad” person - leads to more empathy